Probably not! Which is a shame, because this is a nicely fashioned piece.
I say yes!! I love how you made it a nighttime scene with one lovely lighted window. Gorgeous writing, Bob.
When Mrs Trellis commented I twitched nervously of course and somehow the post became a 'draught' Also I forgot to stick a link in. To your home page - is that OK? I do so love blank verse Willow, it goes with my blank expression.Mrs Trellis is possibly WELSH, be really nice to her everybody.
i rarely chance a piece of jewel like this. thank you.
i check in and am rewarded with two evocative poems linked in a post -- love this bob. and if willow says yes, then the answer is surely, yes.off now to read about the head in the bag.
Very cleverly done -- quite enjoyable.
Surely it will - it must! A delightful shift of light to night.
Wow... Very nice...
Nice one, Bob :) LOL I didn't quite make the four words required. Like your sense of humour.
love how you played with the picture...and i imagine you welcome there...nicely played magpie!
nicely written and cleverly linked to Willow
I also like how you changed the photo to suit the mood of your poem and it truly fits!
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